poster development log (P4,P5)

Poster development log

This is the poster that I have created for the use of advertising my game

In regards to my first poster design the feedback that I received was that the name of my game is not very obvious so it would be a good idea to put it somewhere on the poster also they were able to tell that the monster (bird) was a swallow so they said I should try to make it look different or monstrous and lastly the fire looks to much the same so I should try to morph or deform it so they all look different.

This is something that I created in reaction to the feedback however I also received feedback on this saying that the bird still didn’t look right and the fire still looked strange so I will change the bird and the fire

 This is what I have created from the feedback I received and was told that the fire looks more natural and different and the bird now looks like a monster or mutant so this is now my final design